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Venus
08-04-2008, 06:56 AM
Thru the eyes of an Angel, you see the world as perfect,
But in reality not much of it is worth it
Toubles and woes are a person's ever nightmare
No one else does so why should we show care
Hazy and mystified rubbing eyes to see
Is that homeless person there really me?

I once was a strong person despite all the pain
But that was back when I had nothing to lose but to gain
My dreams and hope that I made happen for me
Gone destroyed since I made that stranger leave

My house my family my pride all torn apart
The entire time the stranger just laughed
Cut hands from the struggle with his knife
Oh god how I wish he took my life
Every room I went to was a bloody destruction
My family's lives no longer there to function

Dazed by a blow to my head
The stranger giggles at the slight of red
Wiping his prints from all that is here
Loving clean as though he does care

I see the problem that has come to me today
They will come and most likely take me away
Where to go, where can I hide?
I am nothing without them by myside
From one corner of this country to the other
How could I have done this to my lover?

Im dirty and cold hidden within
Am I really that bad to have sinned?
Looking around me needing my next fix
Crazed and wild I cant do anything
My head feels like its going to explode
OHH ouch noooo there it goes

Rampaging on the ones around
I dont care how many I take down
Giggling like the manaic I've become
They dont know that im really the one
I did it I can sliently scream
I killed my family it was all me
Did I mean to who cares to find out?

My story of my life and that of many others
Comes from the tales of many mothers
Some born and breed this way but
A SchizophrenicPyscho always enjoys his day

One I start writing I never stop till my work is complete.. this one took all of 15mins :-)

Evil_Demon_Doll
11-17-2008, 04:58 PM
Aww thats a deep poem, I like it, In many ways i can relate to it. Good stuff Kar! <3

Venus
11-19-2008, 02:48 AM
Thank you hun, its was the first poem I have written since my sister passed away, really havent had much inspiration to write more but im sure it will happen when its the right time .
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