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morbid
01-07-2009, 11:21 AM
This was a longer poem. When I was very depressed I used to think about death every day which was scary. Now I'm not in that state anymore, although still somewhat in depression. I learned to cope, but some people haven't been so lucky as to change their mind about suicide.

This poem originally was published in Sad Poems - Depression and Suicide Poems

I held the knife so close to my heart.
Like a foolish child I sat and I cried,
Didn't realize what I had done, what I had tried.
Tears mixed with blood, falling slowly to the ground.
Covered in blood, pulled myself up, in tears scribed:

"To those who don't care, to those who can't see,
Never Give up always thrive to be free."
Didn't know how many people would later cry.
"Tried to be free, yet I see this isn't the way."

Friend at the door, ran as fast as she could.
Too weak to say I'm sorry, otherwise I would.
In tears, looked at the blue sad day.
When you come and see this pool of blood and me,
This isn't the way my life was meant to be.

Fairy
01-07-2009, 05:03 PM
All I can say is... whoa.

Venus
01-07-2009, 07:08 PM
Wow very deep Will <3

morbid
01-08-2009, 11:59 AM
Yea, the poem was probably about a page and half long

crimsoninferno
01-08-2009, 08:22 PM
A bit irking, I must say... Hello Will. :]

morbid
01-08-2009, 08:41 PM
A bit irking, I must say... Hello Will. :]

LOL I love your avatar
it's "so" you

loL <3

crimsoninferno
01-08-2009, 08:52 PM
Why, thank you. I love it, too...It does SCREAM Nia, huh? Hahaha. ^_^ The picture I want for my signature would totally complete it!