Discovery from Hell

[morbid]

An example of one of my non-rhyming poems

I just
found out
that I
am a
jerk
a real
no care
person
I just found out
that I am
no one
nobody
a nowhere person
I just found out
I didn't know
I was hiding
from
love
love of life
and the
wonderful people
in it
I just found out
that I have
gone astray
and didn't
even know it
I just found out

[Venus]

Wow this one is Good, do you write this ?

[crimsoninferno]

I would've liked it better if the "I just found out" parts were separate from what you were going to say next, but it was fine overall.