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crimsoninferno
01-11-2009, 01:44 AM
Forget all the lengthy poetic words...How's about a poem made up of five syllables to begin and end with seven syllables in the middle? 5-7-5 anyone?

-crimsoninferno
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"Color Blind"
Written By: Blk Sapphire

I don't see any
Differences between us
Skin color is void

morbid
01-11-2009, 01:49 AM
FakeBleedingTear (1:45:38 AM): I PUT UP A NEW POEM!
FakeBleedingTear (1:45:39 AM): COMMENT!
FakeBleedingTear (1:45:39 AM): NOW
FakeBleedingTear (1:45:41 AM): e_e
Demothense (1:45:44 AM): please?
FakeBleedingTear (1:45:55 AM): Please mon amie.


k
I don't like haiku's that much
I guess it's because I suck at them
But, Nia , I actually like this one I'm glad you asked me to comment
has a deeper meaning than most "lengthy" poems