How Beautiful

[Bethany]

ok so, basically i really enjoy writing from prompts.. as in, someone gives a choice of topics and you write something based on one of them. The prompt on this one was "Write about a serial killer or a murderer" so this is like.. my poem from a serial killers perspective >_>

Her soft whimpers are so soothing
as I slowly slide a hand across her soft skin
how precious she is, how beautiful

The red of her lips almost begging,
no..longing, longing to be kissed gently
how innocent she is, how beautiful

The binds around her wrists, so tight
she starts to move a little, waking up soon
how peaceful she is, how beautiful

The small silver instrument gleams in the light
I caress her tummy with it slowly
how shiney it is, how beautiful

As I sink it into flesh, crimson appears
little droplets at first, then a small stream
how natural it is, how beautiful

She starts to wake up, her eyes open
wide with fear as she starts to beg
how sexual it is, how beautiful

I brush her cheek with my hand
a smile on my lips, as i push the silver along
how confused she is, how beautiful

I trace along the line now, from her
belly button to her throat, fingers red now
how fragrant it is, how beautiful

She finally lets out a shrill scream
as my hand moves into her chest
how warm she is, how beautiful

I feel for her heart, beating so hard
wrap my fingers around it feeling it
how godly it is, how beautiful

I begin to pull, her eyes begging me
please stop, I want to live
how pleading she is, how beautiful

As it finally rips free, I take a minute
to revel in the beauty of her fear
how delicious it is, how beautiful

I kiss her gorgeous lips as her last
breath escapes, wrapping her back in the sheet
how sexual she is, how beautiful

Back to the club, to find someone else
Our eyes meet across the room, she winks
how flirty she is, how beautiful

She'll find out tonight, the price of beauty
when I make her mine, as I lead her out
how unsuspecting she is, how beautiful

[Venus]

That is fantastic Jenn, I think watching those horrors certainly helped witht that one <3

[crimsoninferno]

She starts to wake up, her eyes open
wide with fear as she starts to beg
how sexual it is, how beautiful

I brush her cheek with my hand
a smile on my lips, as i push the silver along
how confused she is, how beautiful

I trace along the line now, from her
belly button to her throat, fingers red now
how fragrant it is, how beautiful


She'll find out tonight, the price of beauty
when I make her mine, as I lead her out
how unsuspecting she is, how beautiful

These specific stanzas really hit home with me... I think this is absolutely fantastic! I mean, honestly, it is brilliant. Wonderful job, Jenn.

[Bethany]

thank you, im pretty proud of how this one turned out :D

[Fairy]

I think it's great. Fantastic!
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